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https://scholarship.coca-cola.com/eg/ideas#id575 "Find children's passion courses" Voting please 🌸 تصويت من فضلك 💭 ربي يجعله بميزان حسناتك 🍒

Hi,
First of all, sorry for the late reply 🙈
I really liked the idea but i think you need to work on it a little bit. Such an important idea should not be represented in such a trivial way, elaborate more, highlight the importance of your idea
Ah by the way there are some grammatical mistakes like the one in the second line "they does not what their purpose..." it should be "they do not...", if you have a chance to correct the text, it's better to do so.
Best of luck :)))

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