mostly cliche 'upmayein'. tbh it felt very kamchalau effort on the poetry part. i am no poet (however, i m banarasi). try to read more and learn before you write. dont do this via utube platforms lyk social house, unspoken as they have a bunch of "relatable" content with little literature PEACE <3
All the way appreciate that you took out time to give a feedback and i respect it but there are somethings i want to clear and if it seems rude i am sorry in advance
First : every person that writes has a distinct style of writing , has a distinct nature , has distinct expectations from their piece . please respect that .
Second : if you say you are not a poet which even i am.not inwould like to tell you that please respect someone's time ,effort , feelings and emotions that theynput into their piece. Even if you are a poet , that doesnt give you the right to call anyone's piece ' KAM CHALAU' .
Third : A real.writer doesnt search for ' youtube' or doesnt take.inspiration from the ' relatable ' content and it even if he / she does , theres nothing wrong in that .
Fourth , i am a part of delhi university's biggest poetry club , I have won 3 slams with this piece of ' free verse' . Because in our poet/ writer community we do not promote putting down someone's work rather promote changes and improvement. Every writer / poet writes , and writes and then improves.
As far as my poem is concerned i know its not a masterpiece but still is close to my heart and i am very proud of my verse and probably would not like to make any changes.
Fifth : Did you know theres a type of poem format called ' count poems' . Please go on ' Youtube' and listen to one. Its also a free verse but is an internationally recognised poem .
I have been reading / writing poems and articles alot. Plus i am learning each of their types , formations and notions . So i would love if you can learn about some too.
This answer wasnt suppose to be mean , and i am.always open to suggestions and improvement , but if they are written in a respected manner.
We ' POETS' dont take disrespect for our poems
PEACE <3
First : every person that writes has a distinct style of writing , has a distinct nature , has distinct expectations from their piece . please respect that .
Second : if you say you are not a poet which even i am.not inwould like to tell you that please respect someone's time ,effort , feelings and emotions that theynput into their piece. Even if you are a poet , that doesnt give you the right to call anyone's piece ' KAM CHALAU' .
Third : A real.writer doesnt search for ' youtube' or doesnt take.inspiration from the ' relatable ' content and it even if he / she does , theres nothing wrong in that .
Fourth , i am a part of delhi university's biggest poetry club , I have won 3 slams with this piece of ' free verse' . Because in our poet/ writer community we do not promote putting down someone's work rather promote changes and improvement. Every writer / poet writes , and writes and then improves.
As far as my poem is concerned i know its not a masterpiece but still is close to my heart and i am very proud of my verse and probably would not like to make any changes.
Fifth : Did you know theres a type of poem format called ' count poems' . Please go on ' Youtube' and listen to one. Its also a free verse but is an internationally recognised poem .
I have been reading / writing poems and articles alot. Plus i am learning each of their types , formations and notions . So i would love if you can learn about some too.
This answer wasnt suppose to be mean , and i am.always open to suggestions and improvement , but if they are written in a respected manner.
We ' POETS' dont take disrespect for our poems
PEACE <3
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