https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ClQqBh7Z7jA Thoughts
1. Work on your improv skills if you choose to go unscripted. Going unscripted isn't a bad thing but some pull it off better than others and while you have potential, it needs some work.
2. Also work on your acting skills a bit more. You're improving, I'll give you that, however there are certain parts where you overact on certain lines and come of a liiiiittle creepy. There's exaggeration and then there's trying too hard. Your jokey lines were pretty good though.
3. Slight nitpick, but since the guy's voice is kinda slow in the original vid, might want to speed up the vid a little to make the video easier for both you and the viewer to get through and maybe throw in a laugh or two depending on how fast you make the video go. Just make sure that it's still understandable to hear.
Overall, not bad. Work on those three things I brought up and keep at it!
2. Also work on your acting skills a bit more. You're improving, I'll give you that, however there are certain parts where you overact on certain lines and come of a liiiiittle creepy. There's exaggeration and then there's trying too hard. Your jokey lines were pretty good though.
3. Slight nitpick, but since the guy's voice is kinda slow in the original vid, might want to speed up the vid a little to make the video easier for both you and the viewer to get through and maybe throw in a laugh or two depending on how fast you make the video go. Just make sure that it's still understandable to hear.
Overall, not bad. Work on those three things I brought up and keep at it!
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