Ever thought of publishing The King's Slave too? I love that story! <3
I want to. Haha. But I think that one still needs a lot of work. It's written in first person POV and then it's switching from Seth/Aiken to Adrienne/Selene and then there are also scenes where it's Duncan's POV. I
I haven't read much published books that are written like that. So I'd have to either convert it to Third person or write everything in first person but only one POV (which is really hard too) Haha. Err. I don't really know what to do since I think what gives it vibrancy is that when it's changing POV's, the characters' thoughts and emotions are shown well.
I haven't read much published books that are written like that. So I'd have to either convert it to Third person or write everything in first person but only one POV (which is really hard too) Haha. Err. I don't really know what to do since I think what gives it vibrancy is that when it's changing POV's, the characters' thoughts and emotions are shown well.