There r some broken lines in it but that is definatly better than mine. I just got charcoal pencil I have got exams nowadays but I am stubborn n I wont use them until I learn how to. So I will be watching videos on how to use them b/c trust me it hurts when I destroy a pencil
OMG don't call them broken line. Without that sketching doesn't seem nice. Its a rule of sketching