Describe each of the following characters in your own words: Alpha, Bee, Coro, Lego, Starracer, StarRacer, Lihor, Sliver, Otter, Lone, Feather, Rose, Gonzo, Nil, Nel, Reks, Surge, Marxon, Sankoro, Ehks, Eluim, Nix, Arma, Elai, Bayley, Rukkii, White, Putin and his mother?
(and now for part 2!)
Rose: now with more backstory! possibly ask her where she came from at some point. while she was quite unlucky in the forest let me just clarify a few things. 1. she has zero hunting experience. the closes she has gotten to something like this is shooting targets at a shooting range. never shot at a living thing before nor has she been in any form of danger (before the camp she was in was attacked at which she was powerless) 2. she is a 8-10 year old child who runs into a forest a forest-guy like Gonzo finds it hard to survive in and he as quite some experience with surviving on his own. 3. Rose had no way to defend her self. she picked up a stick early on while running though the forest, but the stick was small and feeble ( you can't expect a 8-10 year old to go swing around a 2x4) 4. the reason for her major injury was mostly getting completely worn out, she had not eaten anything that could sustain her for nearly 24 hours nor had she rested. (and taking avali emotionalize into account that says something) and she had gotten stung by a few plants with numbing and similar poisonous properties (she ran thorough a field of the crimson leaf plants so for a good part of the journey she couldn't feel anything from her waist down, she could still move it though) that and i could keep listing things about it, but there are other chars too.
tl;dr: be glad she ain't dead. ( i was seriously think of killing her off for a while this way, thats how close she got)
Gonzo: he is bat-shit insane a good deal of the time. though waht can be expected after you have been alive for more than 800 years by a force you can't understand much less observer safely? won't spoil too much... hehe...
Nil/Nel: these two must be Bee's sidekick's. they are fun and decently interesting buuut i don't see them as much more than NPC's with a little extra meat on them, which is nice, and they make one hell of a dynamic duo. (i mentioned all hospital staff being armed and trained in simple combat, i would really like to see these two fight along side each other at some point)
Reks: her backstory says it all. in my opinion she is the best char of them all, it has plenty of relations and flaws as well as strength. we need to follow her around more. she is also a very emotional character (and i'll be damned if Reks doesn't know how to stay in char.)
Surge: i would also like to see more from this char. even if it is monologue. (maybe a flashback to a fight that went or nearly went really bad?) though he might need just a little bit of balancing, though that does sound like it would be easier to just move mt. Everest up Cthulhu's ass...
(part three... wow...)
Rose: now with more backstory! possibly ask her where she came from at some point. while she was quite unlucky in the forest let me just clarify a few things. 1. she has zero hunting experience. the closes she has gotten to something like this is shooting targets at a shooting range. never shot at a living thing before nor has she been in any form of danger (before the camp she was in was attacked at which she was powerless) 2. she is a 8-10 year old child who runs into a forest a forest-guy like Gonzo finds it hard to survive in and he as quite some experience with surviving on his own. 3. Rose had no way to defend her self. she picked up a stick early on while running though the forest, but the stick was small and feeble ( you can't expect a 8-10 year old to go swing around a 2x4) 4. the reason for her major injury was mostly getting completely worn out, she had not eaten anything that could sustain her for nearly 24 hours nor had she rested. (and taking avali emotionalize into account that says something) and she had gotten stung by a few plants with numbing and similar poisonous properties (she ran thorough a field of the crimson leaf plants so for a good part of the journey she couldn't feel anything from her waist down, she could still move it though) that and i could keep listing things about it, but there are other chars too.
tl;dr: be glad she ain't dead. ( i was seriously think of killing her off for a while this way, thats how close she got)
Gonzo: he is bat-shit insane a good deal of the time. though waht can be expected after you have been alive for more than 800 years by a force you can't understand much less observer safely? won't spoil too much... hehe...
Nil/Nel: these two must be Bee's sidekick's. they are fun and decently interesting buuut i don't see them as much more than NPC's with a little extra meat on them, which is nice, and they make one hell of a dynamic duo. (i mentioned all hospital staff being armed and trained in simple combat, i would really like to see these two fight along side each other at some point)
Reks: her backstory says it all. in my opinion she is the best char of them all, it has plenty of relations and flaws as well as strength. we need to follow her around more. she is also a very emotional character (and i'll be damned if Reks doesn't know how to stay in char.)
Surge: i would also like to see more from this char. even if it is monologue. (maybe a flashback to a fight that went or nearly went really bad?) though he might need just a little bit of balancing, though that does sound like it would be easier to just move mt. Everest up Cthulhu's ass...
(part three... wow...)
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